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writingxonxwalls
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseAnother good poem by you! =)

I was amazed about how much I could relate! Espically with the part,
"You are my inspiration
You are the reason I go on
I love you"
Beautiful.

My only comment, in the last stanza it says "Yu light my world"
That would be all =)

--WxOxW
Black and White Dreams
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseaww this is cute!
who is it about?
tell me on tuesday!
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