Reviews for You Captured My Heart

Black and White Dreams 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abusereally cute, i like this one. i recognize it... i think i read it, but never reviewed it... ha, oh well... ~Black and White Dreams~
Take the Money and Run 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is a really nice poem, i especially how the last four lines flow. I really can't find much that can be improved, but in the beginning, i don't know if it was on purpose but the way the word "smile" is used twice so close together sounds a bit weird to me because that pattern isn't carried out. but still, it doesn't sound bad and there isn't a huge need to change it. Great poem!