Reviews for Alone on the dance floor

Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI love the simplicity thats in some of your poems, its really nice! like the way it flows. i really like the last four lines especially. And i saw your profile, thanks so much! :) look at mine.
Black and White Dreams 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseall i have to say is this: class night 07. i can relate to this =]
Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseIt's nice. Short, but to the point. I very rarely like it when it dragged out and belabored. My advice though, and bear in mind I'm a very bitter person (the love of my life left me) but love is really an illusion. Try not to cling to it too much, because in the end all it does is hurt you, break you down. So avoid getting to attached. good work though. keep it up.
Darla P 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abusevery beautiful and cute :) like it a lot!
Artemis Anderson 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseThis is simply...amazing. Beautiful. Short, but it is all that is needed to explain this feeling. I love this! adds to faves
lordelfy 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abuseaww this is really sweet, kinda how you feel when you finally accomplish something you have been working on for so long. = )