Reviews for but it's never enough

Reviews For: but it's never enough

Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseWow...so many people can relate to this its not even funny. I love the way its written, and i like the first four lines. I think the line "I it that i lead you on" has a typo though. and, just a small suggestion, i think you should split the line after that so its "When i'm only going to slap you/ in the face", and maybe change the line "you take me back every time though" to "but you take me back everytime". it just seems to flow a bit better. Overall great job. --SB, review marathon
writingxonxwalls 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abusewritingxonxwalls from the review game Love the title-- I think that you captured the meaning of the poem in it. I also liked how you portrayed a girl (guy?) that makes mistakes and knows the truth about her relationship with a guy. "I it that I lead you on," That was the only thing I was a little confused on. But great job! =) --WxOxW
Black and White Dreams 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abusei really hate that i never know who your writing about, but you always seem to know who im writing about. well, this is pretty good =] i like it. it sounds like me sometimes. >__
Sam aka when shadows bleed 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon.	abusewow. i just got out of my latest relation ship, and holy shit, that sound like me. "i lead you on when im only going to slap you in the face and hurt you again." wow. and i cant send you a msg, cuz i for got my password, so my email is
Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseYou sound confused alright. No comment... Anyways, the line after "I love too many people" is messed up. I can't figure out what it says. "I hate that I lead you on"?

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