I like it I've never thought about chalk that way before.

How cute! xD

The rhymes suck though. It seems almost forced --but it works in a way that makes me think that you really did put time into this.

The rhyme scheme you've picked is pretty difficult (so I'll give you that), and although it adds something to the story-element and cutesy-esque theme in this poem, if it interferes too much with what you were going for, then just forget the rhymes. Poetry doesn't always have to rhyme.

I like the idea of it though, finally something original and not another cliched angst poem. Simple poems like this is an automatic love for me. Wouldn't it be nice if there was a line about how the chalkboard gives an ear-splittering shriek when someone scratches it? --Just food for thought.

Good job with this, truly I liked it.

~ Audy