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| Faith Adeline 2008-01-12 ch 3,  | abuseI like this, it's different from what you usually write in my opinion. Very good. Faith |
| Faith Adeline 2007-12-28 ch 2, | abuseAh, I liked it. Dark and dreary poems are also so fun to read lol. I look forward to more from cartoons of yesterday and anything else your mind comes up with haha. Keep up the wonderful work! Faith |
| Faith Adeline 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abusehow you got no comments on this amazes me. Truly. I really liked the poem, the images are strong and you can see them really well in the mind. I loved it. Faith |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseGraphic and raw and well done. I don't really care for the way you put the whole poem in bold... it seems to defeat the purpose of bolding something for emphasis. You did a nice job with the images in this poem. It's a strong piece. |