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| spiderfly 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseBrilliance! In this instance, the lack of punctuation increases the tempo of the poem until the last line when it ends on this one, final note that stays with the reader. The rhyming was interesting, and choice of words really good. Seriously well done. |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abusethe rhyming here si so awesome... I love it |
| girl without wings 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseDark and very well done. This could have gotten very annoying very quickly, but it didn't. The repetition of sound created a feeling of madness that was perfect. Keep up the great work. |