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| SummerBaby94 2007-12-28 ch 2,  | abuseha. it's funny how both chapters in with a kiss. i deffinately didn't think that christa would show a mean side. great story! |
| SummerBaby94 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abusei like it!! there's no story that i've seen like this out there! |
| Sophie Stone 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseHa, I like that guy. I'm definately putting this on alert. Work on the dialogue a bit, its seems kind of stunted and not how people would talk in everyday life. Other than that I really liked it. |