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CatDog-runs-fast 2008-05-11 ch 18,	abuseWel done! you finished! I liked how you tied in Gabriel's family and the last line. it was fantastic. i will be looking out for anymore stories you might be wrting in the future.
GrannyP 2008-05-11 ch 15,	abusehmm... I am finding Tilly's reaction a bit selfish, and then I feel a bit guilty for feeling that way about her. I mean, she is the main character and all (in a way) and usually we are supposed to like the main character or feel sympathy for her or something. I don't know if I can do that here. Well, it definitely makes for an interesting story.
GrannyP 2008-05-11 ch 14,	abuseWow. Just wow. Loved the part when Jake kissed Owen in front of the girl and just completely shattered her. Okay, now I sound a bit evil for thinking that was awesome. But really, it was, just because it was so JAKE. But poor Owen. I feel so bad for him.
GrannyP 2008-05-11 ch 13,	abuseJake, Jake, Jake... he makes me giggle a bit, mostly because I don't know what makes his head move. Well, yes, I do, but he's just so different to me, for some reason. Nice last couple of chapters though. I wonder what Tilly will have to sit through next.
rassoodock 2008-05-11 ch 18,	abusei would ask for a sequel, but i figured that might be a bit impossible. shit, you better start up something else soon. the happy ending thing worked, which i am so glad for. they normally end up sucking something awful, but this was not only happy, but believeable. this was a great story, truely.
GrannyP 2008-05-10 ch 11,	abuseLove dad's breakdown. I'd love to do that myself sometime. Tilly must feel very guilty now, now that it's her fault so many people are so messed up. But still sad.
GrannyP 2008-05-10 ch 10,	abuseMy suspicions about Owen are turning out to be more accurate than I thought, but I still have no idea where this story is going. I like it when things keep me guessing.
0ri 2008-05-10 ch 18,	abuseaw ~ what a nostalgic ending. I really liked it. I got all sad because a distant friend of mine died very young. It was a really good story, I'm sorry that my review isn't.. any more thorough then that, but, yeah. Good job !
xAssenax 2008-05-10 ch 18,	abuseThat was so sad, but I love the ending... I want to know what happens next...
Elodus 2008-05-10 ch 18,	abuseloved the way you ended this great story all around
Written Incognito 2008-05-10 ch 18,	abuseYou know me, I love this story. It was beautiful how Tilly and the other characters all grew throughout. Tilly's growth specifically, I felt, was really well done, with her finally wanting her friends to really be happy. And I'm glad that she was finally able to move on... and yeah. I thought it was a really wonderful ending. Good work and congrats on finishing!
Written 2008-05-10 ch 17, anon.	abuseWow. Awesome end to this chapter, seriously. I love how tilly's selfishness seems to be compared to owen.
GrannyP 2008-05-10 ch 9,	abuseWhoa, didn't expect some of that stuff with Owen there. The guys interactions are always interesting. And I don't get guys either.
GrannyP 2008-05-10 ch 8,	abuseOh, I liked this chapter! I was wondering why Tilly never ran into other dead people just walking around and whatnot, and now that she finally did, it's like the starting point for us to see how life can move on after death. Or something like that. Maybe I'm not making any sense. Can't wait to see how this experience alters Tilly's take on life (and death).
GrannyP 2008-05-10 ch 7,	abuseOh wow... now we see some bitterness from Jake toward Owen and we know why! He blames Owen for Tilly dying because Owen made him be away from her that night. Something like that anyway. Sorry I am still so far behind, especially when you jut posted two more chapters today. I will catch up eventually. I always do!

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