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readyforpeace
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abuseI agree this is really sweet. :) It has such great imagery, I can really see this happening before me. My favorite line is, "Leisurely wrapping" I also like the subtle occasional rhyme and the flow of the poem is almost like a dance. Great work!
wingsgirl1313
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abuse*sigh* That was really sweet. I liked it a whole lot.
soliloquium
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseaw, that's really sweet... =DD nice work!
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