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| readyforpeace 2007-12-31 ch 1,  | abuseI agree this is really sweet. :) It has such great imagery, I can really see this happening before me. My favorite line is, "Leisurely wrapping" I also like the subtle occasional rhyme and the flow of the poem is almost like a dance. Great work! |
| wingsgirl1313 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* That was really sweet. I liked it a whole lot. |
| soliloquium 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseaw, that's really sweet... =DD nice work! |