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| Kasee Lara 2008-01-01 ch 1,  | abuseVery lovely. I loved the ending. Perfect and not too cheesy. It was sad but...sweet. :D Nice work. |
| nonaccount 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the disconnected or disjointed mood that you create, it reflects the story well. Good description," But after it, when my hand is still gripping, and my breathing is still ragged, I cry in anger, feeling gross all over." |
| Rachizzle 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseAw, I loved it! It was such a touching story.. haha that seems like sarcasm or something but it's not, I really did like it XD :( NOT ENOUGH ACTION FOR ME THOUGH Lately I just keep wanting to read raunchy sex scenes... m.. delicious.. *cough* XD |
| Back of Beyond 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat one-shot - shame it's just that! |
| SerialXLain 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseHEY. SERIALXLAIN. THAT'S ME! xD Some favorite lines...things...: but the only thing I know is that last time it was a lot easier to note how you had arranged your furniture instead of gazing at your face and wishing you weren’t here. You’re staring at me, waiting for an answer, but that wasn’t a question and that’s not how it works. AND I loved it. :D Thanks so much. Nice job getting in the requirements. :3 lol I liked the "you" instead of the normal, usual stuff. A nice style. And I really liked the narrator. :) A very pretty story. Yay. Thanks. xo |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseCute and bittersweet. I liked it ^_^ And the writing style was interesting, too. |
| Amindaya 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseHad to say it in a review: this is definitely one of your best. :) Way to go, Maga! |