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| Kali Shaelyn 2007-12-27 ch 1,  | abuseAh yes, human nature: to want the things we can't have but want even more the things which lay at the end of a path that seem so easy to obtain - but once we reach out for them, we realise that the path is filled with obstacles. A very good start to a story I must say. Simple yet it carries depth. I look forward to reading more of your work. |