You must finish this! It's absolutely wonderful!

I can't wait to see what happens next. I adore this story.

This is such an amazing story. I really, really enjoy it. I can't wait to read more. :)

Really boring, and reeks of teenage girl. I like Neil Gaiman's take on Snow White better. He had necrophilia and vampires in his. Yours is just... I don't know... Snow White in the tone of a high school romance novel. Anyway, Neil Gaiman also knows how to write, so that's another advantage he has over you. Oh, and he's intelligent, while you're not. Basically, he's just a lot better than you. Maybe you should look up a real author like him sometime, and then you'll learn how badly you fail at writing.

oh this was cool i like the whole vamp idea

i'm glad u stuck 2 the basic structure of snow white and the whole story really works

the story's great

byexx

i'm really looking forward for more
i love it so far

and we learn more ^.^
red hair and green eyes, yauY!
i didn't remember the red hair part afore this
^yes am obsessive with hair...
thanks for updating and hope you continue soon ^.^

HOORAY! YOU UPDATED!
I don't think I ever reviewed this story, and that is my mistake because I've been hoping and praying that you would continue. I'm an idiot like that.

Stories told from a different perspective always capture my attention, and this one is the best so far. (:

I'm watching, and I'll review more often!
romance.

hmm...interesting...keep it coming, this is really good

Drake Van

I'm so glad to hear from you.
It's been so long. Yea.
Anyways still awsome. Hope
there'll be another chap soon.

I just finished reading it, and I'm really looking forward to more!

this is a LOT better than i thought it would be
i'm rather impressed keep it up

I really like this so far, seems like an interesting take on the Grimm's tale. One tiny little thing... When you use words like "species" and "hyperventilate" it kind of kills the old-fashioned mood you're trying to set, because they wouldn't use words like that back then, also some of the modern slang... Sorry, its nit-picky, but I think it would help set the tone to avoid using words like that. I'm looking forward to more soon!

I've really been enjoying the story, which it totally different, while holding onto all those features we all love in our fairytales. The character interaction, expecially in these last chapters, was great, and I can't wait to see how the story progresses.

I really enjoyed this story and I think you are a very talented writer.
Though one area in which I think you let yourself down was in creating the (not sure how else to refer to them...) "dwarves" into vampires and a werewolf; the rest of your story has been highly original and this is such a cliche these days that it was a bit of a let down. I understand that you can't exactly change it now, since it's a pivetful aspect of the story, but that's just what I think.
I do like the idea of vampirism being a disease: it has crossed my mind before, but I've never read story with that version until now - I like it :D
Anyway, I hope this helped. Update soon please, of course.

Drake Van