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Eilinora 2008-08-15 ch 2,	abuseReally boring, and reeks of teenage girl. I like Neil Gaiman's take on Snow White better. He had necrophilia and vampires in his. Yours is just... I don't know... Snow White in the tone of a high school romance novel. Anyway, Neil Gaiman also knows how to write, so that's another advantage he has over you. Oh, and he's intelligent, while you're not. Basically, he's just a lot better than you. Maybe you should look up a real author like him sometime, and then you'll learn how badly you fail at writing.
bluehyperpixie 2008-07-24 ch 8,	abuseoh this was cool i like the whole vamp idea i'm glad u stuck 2 the basic structure of snow white and the whole story really works the story's great byexx
B.D.Smith 2008-06-22 ch 8,	abusei'm really looking forward for more i love it so far
Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan 2008-06-15 ch 8,	abuseand we learn more ^.^ red hair and green eyes, yauY! i didn't remember the red hair part afore this ^yes am obsessive with hair... thanks for updating and hope you continue soon ^.^
romance at short notice. 2008-06-13 ch 8,	abuseHOORAY! YOU UPDATED! I don't think I ever reviewed this story, and that is my mistake because I've been hoping and praying that you would continue. I'm an idiot like that. Stories told from a different perspective always capture my attention, and this one is the best so far. (: I'm watching, and I'll review more often! romance.
Drake Van 2008-06-11 ch 8,	abusehmm...interesting...keep it coming, this is really good Drake Van
killer chipmunk 2008-06-10 ch 8, anon.	abuseI'm so glad to hear from you. It's been so long. Yea. Anyways still awsome. Hope there'll be another chap soon.
DiamondEyedDog 2008-06-10 ch 7,	abuseI just finished reading it, and I'm really looking forward to more!
perdita 2008-06-09 ch 7, anon.	abusethis is a LOT better than i thought it would be i'm rather impressed keep it up
DiamondEyedDog 2008-06-09 ch 5,	abuseI really like this so far, seems like an interesting take on the Grimm's tale. One tiny little thing... When you use words like "species" and "hyperventilate" it kind of kills the old-fashioned mood you're trying to set, because they wouldn't use words like that back then, also some of the modern slang... Sorry, its nit-picky, but I think it would help set the tone to avoid using words like that. I'm looking forward to more soon!
R. M. Kent 2008-06-09 ch 7,	abuseI've really been enjoying the story, which it totally different, while holding onto all those features we all love in our fairytales. The character interaction, expecially in these last chapters, was great, and I can't wait to see how the story progresses.
Drake Van 2008-06-09 ch 7,	abuseI really enjoyed this story and I think you are a very talented writer. Though one area in which I think you let yourself down was in creating the (not sure how else to refer to them...) "dwarves" into vampires and a werewolf; the rest of your story has been highly original and this is such a cliche these days that it was a bit of a let down. I understand that you can't exactly change it now, since it's a pivetful aspect of the story, but that's just what I think. I do like the idea of vampirism being a disease: it has crossed my mind before, but I've never read story with that version until now - I like it :D Anyway, I hope this helped. Update soon please, of course. Drake Van
Kittensinthedustbin 2008-05-26 ch 6,	abuseHio, Night! Lol, do you still remember me? Jessi? ^.^ Meh, probably not XD Not that I blame you. Congrats on your first book being published. I wish I could have read that story before you took it off. XD Oh well, I guess I'll have to buy the book instead! Anyway, I really like the way you re-worked the story of Snow White. I like Gayle's ability to see the 'threads' that connect people. Very nice. I'd have to say so far my favorite vampire is Lisle. Silly old man, you! :D And I really like Joseph, only after one chapter he seems a lot more real than his brother. Blargh! The Lady is scary. She needs to be seriously ** slapped! XP Blood behind the mirror? ^.^ How deliciously morbid of you! Anyway, I know you're busy with your other stories, but I shall still be anxiously awaiting the next chapter of this story. Keep up the awesome work! -Kittens
Crowmanhunter 2008-01-13 ch 6,	abuseHmm, fifth Chapter. You know, since this is called Seven, it just occured to me that it would be quite interesting if this story ended in the seventh chapter. Then again, I could be wrong.
Atamagaokashii Ookami-chan 2008-01-12 ch 6,	abusesiblings indeed XD lol they're fun. darrius is grumpy! tho i don't know if they're suppose to actually mirror the dwarves from the disney movie... ^.^

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