"I feel the rhythm in my fingers"
Favorite line. I feel it conveys the magic of music perfectly.
Though, overall, this poem seems rather jumbled and random. The flow seems to be that of about three different pieces, which makes sense when you said in the description about it being lyrics that were too good to waste.
Maybe if you took about the first part about love it would flow better, that seems to be tacked on as though you were attempting a love poem.
-J.A.