You always have nice vocab!

I'll be honest in saying I wasn't into this piece as much as your other works, but I was nonetheless enthralled by the imperative nature of the short, rhyming lines.

Cool. I love the words you use. I also like the title. In a weird way, it reminds me of red. LOL Keep writing.

I would give you constructive criticism, but I can't think of any! The flow of this is great- love this one, too!