Reviews for Restricted Desire

Camilleta 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abuseYou always have nice vocab!
killer syntax 2008-01-09 ch 1,	abuseI'll be honest in saying I wasn't into this piece as much as your other works, but I was nonetheless enthralled by the imperative nature of the short, rhyming lines.
Luminous Night 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseCool. I love the words you use. I also like the title. In a weird way, it reminds me of red. LOL Keep writing.
Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-04 ch 1,	abuseI would give you constructive criticism, but I can't think of any! The flow of this is great- love this one, too!