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Camilleta 2008-01-29 . chapter 1
You always have nice vocab!
killer syntax 2008-01-09 . chapter 1
I'll be honest in saying I wasn't into this piece as much as your other works, but I was nonetheless enthralled by the imperative nature of the short, rhyming lines.
Grey of Solitude 2008-01-08 . chapter 1
Cool. I love the words you use. I also like the title. In a weird way, it reminds me of red. LOL Keep writing.
Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-04 . chapter 1
I would give you constructive criticism, but I can't think of any! The flow of this is great- love this one, too!
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