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Reviews For: Restricted Desire

Camilleta
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseYou always have nice vocab!
killer syntax
2008-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI'll be honest in saying I wasn't into this piece as much as your other works, but I was nonetheless enthralled by the imperative nature of the short, rhyming lines.
Luminous Night
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseCool. I love the words you use. I also like the title. In a weird way, it reminds me of red. LOL Keep writing.
Katrina Zeffirelli
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseI would give you constructive criticism, but I can't think of any! The flow of this is great- love this one, too!
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