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| chickenlove 2008-01-12 ch 5, anon. | abusehey...I've always liked light reads and your story fitted my taste well. The story is just starting right? so the character isn't that well developed yet...so I'll see how each character go as you update. And maybe more on the descriptions. But all in all...I am entertained. (: |
| fire0ice 2008-01-06 ch 4, anon. | abusewhat is a section? what what are the rankings? |
| japanera 2008-01-04 ch 3, anon. | abuse,.dou itashi mashite,.hehehe yehey another fast update from snogfest-sama,.(hugs the author),..hehehe this chapter is really cute hahaha no doubt keisuke loves keichan,..too bad she has a constipation just great when there are delicious food around you cause one time it also happen to me,..ah so you know that story yeah the lead actor in the story is jun matsumoto,..my beloved koibito *drool*(just kidding),..hehehe dont worry soon your gonna have many reader,.your story is great just keep it going,..gambatte,.!hehehe by the way i am a filipino who happens to be obsess with anything that is japanese,..how about you,.??do you have a friendster??,.hmm pls send me your e-mail add,.ja nee =p |
| japanera 2008-01-04 ch 2, anon. | abuse,.yehey another great chapter,.hahaha,..shin-kun is kinda scary when is mad,..but if im in his place i would react that way,..i guess,..i think his love for keichan is more than a brother should love his sister,..nyahaha i remember the story "boku wa imouto ni koi o suru" have you heard of it?,.well anyway back to the story,..haha i think it would be great if kei-kun would also love keichan in a different way just to make the story complicated,..hahaha poor kei-chan,..(evil me *laughs like a maniac*)hehehe and i sure hope that keichan little sis wud learn to get along with other people,..cause i kinda pity introvert people cause they dont know what they are missing,..hehehe again,..pls update your story or i will kill you,..hahha just kidding ja nee,..=p |
| japanera 2008-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuse,.your story sure is something,..your ideas is really great gee..im envious of you,..hehehe i totally salute you,.hmm,..poor keira for having a strange family but i really think this what makes a cool family and having brothers sure is fun,..hehehe bad thing im the eldest in tha family,..i really like to have a onii-chan,..hmm anyway,..her ability to play basketball is really cool,..i wish i learn how to play basketball also,..hmm,..pls update faster,..dont wori i promiz to make a review every chapter,..ja nee,..=p |