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| RedWheeler 2008-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseHeh. Once you said Linkin Park, I had their vocals in my head when I was reading the lyrics. Ironically, I had been listening to Hybrid Theory earlier today, rediscovering songs I forgot about. Anyway, I loved the song. So it's an instant fave. Honestly, would have never thought you would include rap into one of your songs - so that's rather interesting. Those segments were probably my favourite, although the lyrics all together were well put together. My absolute favourite segment was: "I've, tried too hard so now I'm displaced! And I can't save myself when I'm fallen from grace! Your religions are lies, and your God ain't real! And Satan's a hoax, cause there's no souls to steal!" I especially love the part about Satan and the souls. Anywho, I didn't really catch any errors within the song. But your summary sort of has a few, missing letters and whatnot. I wasn't sure if you had noticed or not. Amazing job, per usual. |
| Zetzumei 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseloved this! you have real talent. :D |