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| Leaves of Labefaction 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseI loved it! ... or at least the first half. I wish I could just erase my memories of the second half and still have a beautiful tragedy in my head. I thought of adding it to my favorites until the ending. Too happy, too ... I don't know. That is just not the way things are for me. Still, great writing style and beautiful imagery. -LoL |
| girl without wings 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseThis made me think of the movie V for Vendetta and the scene in which a main character is shorn of her hair and taken captive until she fully embraces her identity and mortality. Nice job with the emotions in this piece. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abusewow. incredibly well written. i don't think i understand every part of it but i like the vagueness. i think that this is unique and creative. good work. keep writing. = ) |