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| akaCHEEKS 2008-07-24 ch 16,  | abusethis reminds me of a jane austen story. |
| ShonaiulaRose 2008-05-13 ch 16, | abuseI really like this! It's so sweet, and the description of that era is good too! ^^ I really like the characters, especially Aurelie |
| HelloLovely 2008-04-14 ch 16, | abuseIt was really sweet, i enjoyed it. Love, Becca |
| Llyfr 2008-04-02 ch 2, | abuseI am enjoying this immensely so far. I can not wait to read the rest! Extremely well-written, and I am most intrigued by the plotline. |
| MuzikalWriter 2008-02-07 ch 2, | abuseIt took me until halfway through the first paragraph to realize that you'd switched perspective from James to Aurélie...the "skirts" part was rather interesting. The relationship between these two is very interesting as well. You have a lot of skill in writing conversation. |
| MuzikalWriter 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseAh, Regency romance. I love it. This is really intriguing so far. I love the conversation between James and Nathaniel, they really seem to be like great friends who can openly tease each other. The only thing I'd watch is your paragraphs...sometimes you make breaks in the page where there shouldn't be any and you avoi making them in spots where they should be. But the words themselves are fantastic. |
| cinnamon-24 2008-02-02 ch 10, | abuseAw! I love it! Update! |
| cinnamon-24 2008-02-02 ch 8, | abuseLove it! Lord Clyne... my curiosity increses! |
| Prieda Solo 2008-01-23 ch 3, | abuselovely. I like your characters alot, and the descriptions and general atmosphere of the ballroom is great (dialogue back to cool as well :) Are the names OK? I know very little about the regency, but I would double-check Zoe if i were you. Although my fics are so stupidly anachronistic that's quite hypocritical, and it certainly doesn't interfere with the mood at all. I have to go now :( But I will try to come back to this later :) |
| Prieda Solo 2008-01-23 ch 2, | abuseooh. the plot thickens :) Love this. love the characters. love that i'm wasting time. One crit: watch the dialogue, sometimes it's not as crisp as it could be =D |
| Prieda Solo 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusenice! I love nte already. Well set up and the characters are fab. |
| Stephanie Leroux 2008-01-12 ch 5, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this story. I can't wait to read more. I like how you incorporate french in the dialogue. I did notice a few errors however. Make sure you're using the right expressions. Also, the name is written Geneviève not Geneviéve. |
| Adrienne Jones 2008-01-06 ch 4, | abuseThis story is so cute. I can't wait to read more. I am absolutely loving James, although I think it could be made a little clearer when you switch narrators. Perhaps put the different points of view in different chapters. Just an idea. Great job so far though! |
| cinnamon-24 2008-01-05 ch 4, | abusehehe! I love it! Please please update! |
| cinnamon-24 2008-01-05 ch 3, | abusehahaha! |