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| Haley Hardcore 2008-10-12 ch 23,  | abusekewls she visited a blood bar and wonder if jonas will ever find out great chapter |
| keywordparamore 2008-10-12 ch 23, | abuseSo... I intensely love this. You make Jonas and Kate's relationship real even though one of them is immortal. This is really great. I love reading it! |
| vroomvrooom92 2008-10-11 ch 23, | abuseyou know how to keep a girl hooked. |
| heartfeltlove 2008-10-11 ch 23, | abuseSneaky! XD Awesome chapter! |
| heartfeltlove 2008-10-11 ch 22, | abuse"I swear my entire reproductive ovaries convulsed at his words." Can they even do that? If they can I need to find someone to make them do that! XD For some reason instead of finding jonas sexy in this chapter I found him funny. Awesome chapter. |
| namegame 2008-10-11 ch 23, | abuseUh oh! You're making me nervous! The random vamp asking about Jonas' favorite and trench coat guy following Megan sound like bad news. (Possibly the same bad news?) I enjoyed your last chapter, too, though I think I forgot to comment. I thought it fantastic, btw, when you wrote: "We both saw the irony in me clinging to Jonas’ arm whenever it got a little scary for me." Anyway, good job on both chapters and please update soon! I can't wait to read more. |
| vroomvrooom92 2008-10-05 ch 22, | abuseyou are amazing. I LOVE this story. a lot. |
| Haley Hardcore 2008-10-05 ch 22, | abusegreat chapter lol cant wait till the next one |
| nikkilicious377 2008-10-05 ch 22, | abuseThis chapter was amazing! I was so excited for an update, haha. Date night was sweet and I laughed my ** off when it said they were seeing Dracula! :D Great choice. And of course, the last part was hot and sweet and sexy and intense. Its so amazing to me how you write this so perfectly. She wants to give him what he wants and I loved how he finally acquiesced and let her. Just beautiful. They are one of my favorite vampire couples ever! And that is saying something, haha. Can't wait for more darling. |
| namegame 2008-09-07 ch 21, | abuseI can't wait for your next update! |
| belle1220 2008-08-20 ch 21, | abuseNot too much happened, but it's good to see Kate and Megan get passed the awkwardness. |
| Haley Hardcore 2008-08-19 ch 21, | abusethats great her and megan are on good terms and such now and lol drunken stupor |
| namegame 2008-08-18 ch 20, | abuseI just found your story, and am quite taken with it. I don't usually go for vampire fics, but I'm really enjoying this one. Kate's character reads very realistically to me, in particular. For some reason I'm excited to see her next interaction with Megan, now that everything's out in the open. I'm really glad you have Eve playing such a big role, too. She's fun and lightens things up in a way that serves your story well. And, yeah, you write really hot sex scenes, which is hard to do. Good job all around! |
| belle1220 2008-08-16 ch 20, | abuseI really like this story. I'm a little curious about how this is going to work out. They've already promised to not turn her. I'm really interested in learning more about the vampire myth you referred to earlier about him returning to human form by getting her pregnant. You've really got me thinking with this story. Also, love the sex! Glad they're finally doing it :) |
| balloonatic 2008-08-16 ch 20, | abuse*nods head knowingly* Nature is a **. Fangs for the double update. |