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| Lady Fingers 2008-02-05 ch 1,  | abuseshort sweet spectacular |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great haiku! Very well constructed and expressed. Awesome! Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Basara 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abusea sweet expression of nature... nice... |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI like the alliteration in the first line a lot.. awesome job |
| Sonora the free 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI like this one. I remember you writing this. |
| say this sooner 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely beautiful, nice work! |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseVery nice; I love the sleeping beauty line. Juliet. |
| lupine-eyes 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I'm not usually one for hiakus, but I love these lines, especially the last one. "The Earth is my cage." ^_^ |