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| Silveralsa 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the poem, I see why it got the honor. It has a good cadence and imagery! |
| Core Satiated 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseNice job! I love how you characterized self confidence in this. It is a situation that we all can pretty much say that we've been in, and you captured it beautifully. I can definitely see why this won the award. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abusethat's cute. i really like it. the off and on rhyme was a little distracting, but it was really good for the most part. what was the contest you got an honorable mention for? i am entering my poem, "oops" into a contest but i am not sure how that's going to turn out. i am really nervous...but i am happy for you that you did well in yours. = ) this is really nice. keep writing. = ) |
| PocoSnow15 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, that was great. I think you should pursue writing more poetry, the message came through in this and I really liked it. |