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| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-01-12 ch 1,  | abusei agree with everything Julius said. This is an extremely good poem. |
| Rekawach 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseI really love your writing, you tackle things from completely original perspectives. Very nice... i like... |
| Sonora the free 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThat really speaks an issue. |
| Julius Gillian 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseYou're simple? You could've fooled me. I thought this was going to be a poem about how 'simple' you've managed to see life in as a perspective, and found bliss in this. As if by seeing something simple you seperate yourself from materialism and take on a more spiritual point of view of life. This poem is the kind of poem that I enjoy because it commands the reader to bypass their own bias and look at a certain perspective they probably take for granted. There were lots of great lines in this, and it was so matter-of-factly too. This was very well done. 'as if i wasn't standing there. as if those words were too complex.' I really like these lines and how you continue the thought by using the library and handicapped entrance because you thought it was meant for 'people like you.' I think you really are proving something to the world by writing this. Writing is very powerful in its own quiet way, but it can be very loud simultaneously. But you understand all of that I'm sure. Please take this poem with you through your life, I think this is an excellet piece of work. Definantly moved me. |