i really really enjoyed this poem. the tone of it was casual yet deep at the same time. your descriptions were amazing and brought me into your writing. loved the last line. so tragic. one thing, a grammar thing. In your second line instead of using a comma, use a semi colon. other than that great job!
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~fatbird:)

i understand.

these lines are beautiful;
i wish you would've followed me one more time
but i have a feeling that kissing you under the stars
would hurt a lot more now
then it ever did in my imagination

i like your poem, but i wouldn't put your best line in your summary. it ruins it.

aw, that's really sad. i really kinda like it though. but i think you're right; it would hurt more to have him follow you again...but also understand what you mean when you say he's the closest thing you've come to love...i've felt that way about someone before...but it would hurt to face him in that way again...knowing it would never last.

good work. keep writing. = )

there's really something unusual about this, an innocence that's mixed with cynicsm. works well.