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Two Of Spades 2008-04-08 . chapter 1
Mm, very nice. Its sad how so many people expect tears to equate to sorrow. (That was redundant on my part). Anyway, onto your story, poem?, story? Doesn't really matter, nyaah. I really loved the line "how can I grieve for something as permanent as your shadow" Hmm, I think the enigmatic and incomplete nature of the person who left is very fitting for the shadow line. Cya!
Sasha Williams 2008-03-23 . chapter 1
Oh, how sad. I was a little confused, and I'm not sure if this is what it was supposed to be talking about, but - was the persona a dog/cat? Though I suppose not, because it mentioned hands and coffee.
irenethewriter 2008-01-10 . chapter 1
I wish dogs never had to die. :'(
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