 Two Of Spades 2008-04-08 . chapter 1Mm, very nice. Its sad how so many people expect tears to equate to sorrow. (That was redundant on my part). Anyway, onto your story, poem?, story? Doesn't really matter, nyaah. I really loved the line "how can I grieve for something as permanent as your shadow" Hmm, I think the enigmatic and incomplete nature of the person who left is very fitting for the shadow line. Cya! |
 Sasha Williams 2008-03-23 . chapter 1Oh, how sad. I was a little confused, and I'm not sure if this is what it was supposed to be talking about, but - was the persona a dog/cat? Though I suppose not, because it mentioned hands and coffee. |