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| DeadGurrl 2007-12-29 ch 1,  | abusehmm... i liked it. for some reason... but i feel almost...sorry for the 'sketchy man' he's seems so desperate to make this girl fall in love with him, as he is with her. Other than that, I love the ending 'and then these officers came...' was almost as if he was naive and he didn't know whatsoever that she hates him and wants him to get away from her. Well, great story, i love it. Signed, DeadGurrl, Better Off Dead ^*^ |
| ode to melancholy 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuselol!! "Sketchy men of the world, unite!" ^^ This was good, kinda weird, but still good. ;) |