AWESOME! ( igotta stop using that word, but i find myself incabable of doing so when reading your poems). fantabulous (there we go) loved this! the rhyming was flawless and it was just...well, lets just say i'm gonna put it on my favorites *does favorite dace* (and yes, there is one)
keep it up:)

It makes me think of my grandpa, I miss him so much.
I wish he were still here.
Hayley Elizabeth.
You got me crying again.

This is my favourite... I've always thought Remembrance Day and ANZAC Day were really powerful... I like it a lot... it's really good.
xox
Saralisa