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| wordsworth in a garbage can 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseprose poetry is a wonderful thing. you capture it excellently. my attention was hooked, from beginning to end. it's a hard thing to write but you did it exceptionally. the second poem I think I preferred, but the way you ended the first ("bombs bursting over Baghdad") was genius. |