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| Green Eyed Angel 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseThat's a great story, but a bit too cliche and unreal. I mean, that can't happen. But if it can... I'll just go and get some marshmallow goo and "accidently" spill it on some hot guy. Hey, it worked for Aly! And plus, verbal diarhhoea (as I prefer to call it) is something i suffer from as well, unfortunately. |
| jaded image 2008-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHahha, that was super cute :) I loved Aly's rambling and random tangents, and how she just blurts things out. This was nicely done! |
| L3G3nD 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHaha how adorable! Sweet and yet simple. I like it. Anyway, happy writing. Keep up with the good works XD. |
| Yuniko 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abusei love how aly rambles, so cute! ierno why, maybe i was a little insane today, but ur story got me cracking up every few lines or so. never laughed so much from a fictionpress story. gotta give u props. |
| jyska 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. It was adorable. And new. So once more, super cute, I loved it. |
| NeverEndingNights 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abusehehehe. I like! Very cute. Love Sheen |
| Nocturnal silhouette 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! A wonderful read. It's going on my favorites. |