wow, I love it. maybe tomorrow.

And maybe the butcher eats salad.

wow. just wow. very nice rhyming, it was so effortless, and everything flowed really well. very nice job.

Such a vivid description. I love the way that you wrote this and the structure. Such bittersweet thoughts, love is never what we want it to be.

Keep it up.

Wow. This is one great display of artistic ability. The image was painted in such a vivid way it seems as if the words came alive as I read them. The raw emotion here definitely sets it aside from other pieces that I have read. I think anyone who has ever experience a onesided love affair can relate to this piece. However, the detail and again, the emotion make it a situation that anyone can empathize with. Great Work

I love the beginning how you tell when the only time he comes to you is... and I also really love the ending.. so hopeful even when you probably really shouldnt be

This is raw bitterness, I wouldn't be surprised if the author was already aware that he'll never find true love with this person. Excuse me on that, because I don't know this person as well as you do. In my opinion and from what I've read, keeping a relationship with this person seems fleeting and hopeless.

The underlying emotion of anger and misery is very evident in this poem, and I like how you ended it with 'maybe tomorrow' will be a better day. Like this girl is like a lottery, maybe tomorrow I'll get something better. Maybe. What if.

I hope you find your happiness and no when to call it quits.

This was very well written, don't pass this poem off as worthless. Keep writin, good luck.