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im currently inspired to write an emo poem.
stay tuned

Interesting. These two sort of stories feel very sharp and clear here. I like how bit by bit the italics seem to take over the piece. There's no poetic reason for liking it. It's mostly that it blends together nicely and looks pretty good as a final version.

I find this quite intriguing, I'll admit. I like that it's almost like a story, that it makes me feel as though I'm reading a full story with characters I know and love. There's a comforting, solid feel to that. It's sad but not purely depressing, and it has beauty to it. I don't really know what to say, except that I like it and that it's making my brain think. Very nice job.

very sad and beautiful... I like the questions it asks in the chorusy part.. nicely done