Wow, this is great!

aw so sweet!

aw!
this is so kawaii and pretty!
well done.

Thats such a cute story.

aaw, this is so kawaii! I think I got it when God said, “I’ve send an angel to be your guardian to take care of you, don’t worry, she’ll learn you walk and with her help you’ll grow into a big and mature human being.”
e, it's so kyoot!
(apologies for the spelling (or lack thereof))

Aw...this was so cute! I loved this story, you're a good writer! The only constructive critisism is that it's kinda hard to read when its in one long paragraph, so maybe you could indent after each person speaks (just a suggestion...in fact I don't really recall if I did that even...)anyways, I thought this was a superb story and I loved your idea!