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Coralollie
2008-07-12
ch 1,
abusethree short lines of truth and beaty
i love it!
pendisciple
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseNice haiku. I like how it's straight to the point. Along with the title, it gives a very clear image of what you're trying to say. I also enjoyed the 'Red Ribbon' analogy. Good poem.
Water Archer Princess
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseI loved this... I'm a firm believer of the sacredness of sex and marriage, so I can really relate to this haiku. Nice. ü
canoo
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abusei love it! and i agree with the person who wants to put it on a t-shirt, it's so rare for anyone to want that in their life anymore. people think it's like a disease to keep yourself chase until the very right one comes along. but it's not, it's just a great way to maintain purity and prevent the brokenhearts that come with giving one's self up too soon.
:D
fatbird33
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abusegood for you!
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Peanuts Factory
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseCute:)
dragonflydreamer
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseReviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! (link in profile)

This is amazing! I don't think I could possibly say anything in this review that could truely do this justice. You said so much in such a simple way. Working with the predefined 17 words, you picked some extremely powerful ones. I loved this so much!
PheonixLament
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseI want to print this and put it on a shirt, so the whole world can see. Very very very well said. You're rare. We're rare, but I'm so glad we exist. Not many people can hold a vow like this, I'm glad we can.
Purpose
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuseIt's so hard to keep your chasity, that just means you have to be stronger. I've always been a fan of haikus, sweet and simple and strait to the point (the Japenese got something right there that and samurai swords).
Child'sHope
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's excellent. Sometimes simplicity is best, and you've managed to get the point across beautifully in a few words. If anything could be perfect, this would easily be.
Thoughtful Silence
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, this was beautifully done- very honest and powerful, made more so by the confines of the haiku intensifying each of your words. Good job.

-Silence
Thermite
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseIt's very simple and honest. Honesty is hard to come by these days. Very cute, if a haiku could be considered cute. I shall check out your other writings. Cheers!
Dreaming Chica
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful! Your words are simple but so effective! Always stay true to your self!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
electric feel
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusewriting about your belief in abstinence could quickly become long, condescending and opinionated.

putting it simply in a haiku was the perfect choice.
Arcane-Fox
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseThis seemed very meaningful and well done, I liked it, By the way, thanks for the review.
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