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| adsaige 2008-07-04 ch 12,  | abusethere is such strong language and imagery in these words. it makes me sad to know that eventually this...Thomas and Rebecca must come to an end. |
| Elle88 2008-04-21 ch 9, | abuseThis is very good, very unusual and captivating. I like it! |
| aprettywar 2008-04-01 ch 6, | abusewhat a wonderful and passionate collection of stories =) |
| adsaige 2008-03-09 ch 7, | abusesorry, it's taken so long for me to review. forgive me, eh? update stories, added a new one.. neway, this was soft piece, really conveyed the feelings. the only thing is when you do the italics like 'does he know what's he going to her?' i think you should insert a break like to maybe organize that a bit? otherwise, love it. |
| Luvey Monette 2008-02-24 ch 6, | abuseOh man this going to be one dangerous affair but why would she stay with a man that abuses her? This won't be good. Can't wait for more. |
| adsaige 2008-02-22 ch 6, | abusei think this is my favorite piece so far. such longing that is always found in a siren's song, such beauty. it causes my heart to beat in my chest oh-so-softly. i will be updating all my stories and poem soon, preferably tonight. |
| Luvey Monette 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abuseReally like where this is going as well. I love writing about secret love affairs. Espeically ones where you know their meant to be together truly. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Luvey Monette 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseI really have to say, this beginning was sensational. I could really picture it. Great stuff. |
| about.us. 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseI really like this piece! It's very interesting and the descriptions you use are beautiful |
| adsaige 2008-02-11 ch 5, | abusetwo words: absolutely beautiful! -♥ |
| adsaige 2008-01-07 ch 3, | abusei like this collection alot...and i really liked this chapter...except something about it rubbed me the wrong way. don't let that deter you though, because it wasn't meant to be negative. [maybe it's the format??] |
| adsaige 2008-01-02 ch 2, | abusesuch beauty. i shall be watching this piece closing. update soon! |
| Masochistic Lion Stupid Lam... 2008-01-01 ch 2, | abusethis is great! update soon! |
| adsaige 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuse...wow. interesting. i'm going to be looking forward to this collection, though the only thing that trips me up is the first paragraph. Too much repetition of "smoke", damn near drove me crazy. Not really, but it's like a word being repeated over and over...but not funny. Never mind, inside joke curtesy of VH1. Heh. Keeping working on this. I see a lot of potential in your future. |