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Tytherpol
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuseIt is honest.
i admire the piece, actually.
i don't relate or like it much,
but i love the style and the urgency and the playful ironies you twisted your words to create.

much like
the book i read this morning, The Awakening, actually.
i hated /hated/ the book. worst book i probably have ever read.
but i loved parts of it.
the parts where the characters seemed real enough for their bodies to come out of the ink letters
(even though i hated the characters, too).
but it is much like this poem because what the author gave to it really strengthened it and gave it a base
that at least let the reader know that "hey. this is what you got. work through it because it actually has some pretty neat meanings, & ps u ain't all the great yourself oh-mighty-reader."

you have some really neat ideas here. i like the bluntness of that little title of oxymoron-ic-ness-? :/ . actually, i probably love it.
and i love what is behind your twisting of images. it's neat.
"glows realizing her God was more than star dust and doctrines frightened" and pretty.

-ty.
Pixie in a Birdcage
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuseBrilliantly done! I adore the religious imagery, especially the reference to the noses as devil horns and to the Bible as "her god." And the first line is definitly my favorite: "He kissed her religiously." Lovely job.
James E. Clerk
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseHaving been in a similar relationship, I can understand the inner struggle that she is facing... I love how you make the references and illusions to the devil and Christ... Great job.
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