|Reviews for Making It|
| Faith Adeline 12/30/07 . chapter 1
hmm, I like this. Very good.
| Tytherpol 12/30/07 . chapter 1
i love this piece.
the rhythms and the imagery you included really expressed your point well.
the ending (esp the last two lines) was a little ... redundant i guess
i just think you can write better than it
but despite that little critique, i really think this is a neat piece.