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| Faith Adeline 2007-12-30 ch 1,  | abusehmm, I like this. Very good. Faith |
| Tytherpol 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abusei love this piece. the rhythms and the imagery you included really expressed your point well. the ending (esp the last two lines) was a little ... redundant i guess i just think you can write better than it but despite that little critique, i really think this is a neat piece. |