 LeahDude 2009-09-28 . chapter 4I love it! I love Nyx's character and the plot is a good one. I like all the fantasy elements you added in, with the magic and dragons...it's really amazing. Please, please start writing/updating again. It's great. |
 elyrian 2009-03-11 . chapter 4This is so interesting! I hope you are planning to continue it. I can't wait to find out what's really going on between Nyx and Amick. I'm a huge fan of anything dragon, so please, please keep going with this story! |
 Soraya Zeeva 2009-03-01 . chapter 4I want to know what's going on to. Could you please update this story? |
 Soraya Zeeva 2009-03-01 . chapter 1I'm excited. This sounds really good. |
 X0ImaginaryGirl0X 2009-02-02 . chapter 1Hey good chapter. Very nice. Amick sounds like a fun character.
There were just a few mistakes.
For example:
"And now, I had to let him go." should be "And now, I have to let him go."
But otherwise good, I really enjoyed it. |
 chrnoskitty 2009-01-10 . chapter 4This is a very very cute story. I really like it. the chapters were short, but I still fell in love with the characters of Nyx and Amick. So, I would hope that you could update it, upon your earliest convience? I'll be eagerly awaiting that time... |
 dot.dash.score 2008-11-16 . chapter 4I've enjoyed this story so far...hoping you'll finish it. (: |
 Katsumi-kun 2008-10-24 . chapter 4oh I am loving this story so far. I love the whole fantasy background and it is really original and descriptive while still using words used in real life. |
 Touch-of-Frost 2008-10-13 . chapter 4I love how unique this story is. I found it off another author's favorites, and I'm so glad I did.
Your characters are completely enthralling. Nyx is intriguing, and I want to know more about him. There is a lot of fun to be had with such a character. Amick is strange, and seems to be a little bit of a mix between characters right now as though he hasn't been quite set yet- but I like it in him. It makes the changes he is going through that much more confusing, in a good way.
I think that the kingdom and all the politics need to have a bit more detail. It's interesting, the sudden shift between worlds, but a little abrupt for the flow of the story. Building up a little more to the shift, or even just adding detail as the story progresses, would remedy this and give the reader a more solid background. It would also make the reader feel closer to Amick. Adding more detail of Amick and Nyx's relationship when Amick is King would also be a good thing.
Please post a new chapter soon! I really enjoy this story and would love to see where it's going! |
 Essie 2008-09-14 . chapter 4 Wow! i just found this. Great start. Very intriguing. Love the fall from power. Love the reversal of roles between master and pet ... update soon?! |
 Teldra 2008-09-01 . chapter 4Lovely story! Would love to see more ^_^ |
 PencilSketchS 2008-07-31 . chapter 4i've got a bit of an idea what is going on, but of course i won't know until u have written more. so please write more. |
 WickedRedHead 2008-07-04 . chapter 4Thats it?! You've got to update, this is awesome! |
 tmelange1 2008-06-25 . chapter 4Lovely story! Would love to see more! Bravo! |
 Midnights Scream 2008-06-19 . chapter 4it's really good and I like it I'm just sad that there isn't very much and you update so rarely. :) good job! |