Reviews for A Broken State Of Mind

Strangely Natural 2008-09-08 ch 6,	Please add more chapters this a cute story with potential.
TeaWithOnions 2008-07-21 ch 1,	Very interesting concept and characters. It kind of makes me wish there were more to this. But I like it for its simplicity. Thanks for the review.
fatbird33 2008-01-13 ch 2,	its good. please continue.
Tortured Breath 2008-01-07 ch 2,	Well! It is another short chapter and I guess that that is alright. But I would suggest that you begin to make them longer. It is hard to read something that is so short. But it is good writing. Keep up the good work! ~Dark Angel
Tortured Breath 2008-01-02 ch 1,	Well this is a great start to the story. A lot of suspense. The only thing that I would be worried about is that you keep the same writing styles in the rest of the chapters. So many times authors will start out with this FANTASTIC prologue and then the chapters will go downhill completely. But I have a feeling that that won't happen here. Can't wait to read more! ~Dark Angel
fatbird33 2008-01-02 ch 1,	ohh who is it? who is it? good job at suspense. please continue.