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| Malissa Michelle White 2008-01-01 ch 1,  | abuseYour introductory line is honestly the best line i've read in some time. The contrast that exists between your words, and the balance you maintain despite them, is remarkable. Tells me of an advanced poet, a natural talent. Even "Mr. Stone-" speaks to your abilities. You capitalize "Create" along with "Man" making them entities unlike the lightness and darkness you speak on. Perhaps because creation is the active in this poem, not necessarily the lightness or darkness. Working conjunctively with Man, Create inspires some of your words. The injections that create balance within their stanzas, also give the impression of weights, and the poem visually competes for that balance. In short, great work. I hope my review made sense! |
| Nirvanic Panic 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is very well written! A really good theme to write about, and you present it in a very unique way. The fifth stanza is my favorite. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseInteresting work. I like the sentiments of the first stanza. Keep writing! |