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kazoua 2009-10-02 . chapter 2
Well, eh. Now the title makes sense.
kazoua 2009-10-02 . chapter 1
i should stop coming to school when i don't have class, but i'm a nerd like that. And i love reading your stories. It gives me a reason to procrastinate. Haha, yeah.
s. 2009-07-29 . chapter 2
i've already read part 1 of the story on aff and...god, i love it. the love eden and josh shared is so wonderful and prechious...i was so sad when i realized josh is dead...and sean, well, i'm also sorry for him, i think he's really not a bad guy, but he is not josh. and eden just can't forget josh, continues loving him so much. so - as sad as it is - death is the only possibility to re-unite them
This-is-my-penname-2 2009-04-18 . chapter 2
i cry every time i read this story. i love it.
Streudel 2009-04-14 . chapter 2
... I shouldn't have read this. Now I'm so sad.

Seriously, though... this was great. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Great short, I loved it. =]

Now...onto the next story :D
lovefordemons 2009-01-11 . chapter 3
I loved this story, but I'm not used to reading depressing stories. However, it was still really good.
ShadowMe 2009-01-09 . chapter 2
Your wrote a beautiful story. I cried practically through the whole thing. Great story, really.
Pervy Muskrat 2009-01-02 . chapter 2
This is an absolutely beautiful story.

But it could be even more beautiful if it was proofread.

I'm offering to do this for you.
StoicCrying 2008-12-24 . chapter 2
Beautiful...Just So Beautiful!
Essie 2008-11-24 . chapter 2
blinks o_o is that an actual update? *happy dance*

This is and was one of my favourite one-shots. The first part is poignant enough to stand on it's own. The second part just helps me with closure because seriously your first part was heartachingly sad.

a few spelling errors (no biggie) except for "as an organism crept up on me" which made me rofl.I've seen organisms mistaken for orgasms but never the other way around ... so i lol-ed.

So rereadable a million times over.
Shiyuri 2008-11-24 . chapter 2
Hey, it's me, the one who wanted to translate your fic. :)

A friend asked me, Are you gonna translate chapter 2 of "Running from Eden." I was gonna say it was not out yet, but thought I should check, you know, just because. And, voila, what's this? O_O

I was in a rush, so I couldn't read chapter 2 slow enough and the end left me confused. But I promise I'll read it again tomorrow. ^^ Thank you for finishing it.

P.S: E, the rating for this chapter goes up! I can read M fic, but translating it is an entirely different matter... ;__;
breezies 2008-06-12 . chapter 2
Did you already delete part two? I really want to know what happens! Did Josh go to NY? Did he die? Did they really go together, and then he dies? I wanna know! I have too many questions. Yeah, so you can probably tell already that I like the story. Please post the second part!
fox999 2008-05-04 . chapter 2
Gwah! I loved it! I'd be happy if you made a second part, but if you don't I understand
RoseLife 2008-05-02 . chapter 2
i really love this story
please tell me josh is not dead !
eden sounds very nice, i feel sorry for him, lousy boyfriend he has
continuecontinue??
^^
vampireNovelist 2008-04-30 . chapter 2
I loved it. The love shared between Josh, and Eden even after death was just...beautiful. I would love to see part two, just because I loved this one.
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