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| breezies 2008-06-12 ch 2,  | abuseDid you already delete part two? I really want to know what happens! Did Josh go to NY? Did he die? Did they really go together, and then he dies? I wanna know! I have too many questions. Yeah, so you can probably tell already that I like the story. Please post the second part! |
| fox999 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseGwah! I loved it! I'd be happy if you made a second part, but if you don't I understand |
| RoseLife 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abusei really love this story please tell me josh is not dead ! eden sounds very nice, i feel sorry for him, lousy boyfriend he has continuecontinue?? ^^ |
| vampireNovelist 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abuseI loved it. The love shared between Josh, and Eden even after death was just...beautiful. I would love to see part two, just because I loved this one. |
| gothicHobbit08 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseyes, you should put up part 2, dang it! |
| Mary's.Song 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseI think this story is perfect the way it is. But I also want to find out what happens next. I think you should post the next part just because I'm curious. :P |
| Back of Beyond 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseI'd be interested in a part two. :] |
| Essie 2008-04-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis was beautiful. Melancholic and reminiscent. I think it should be a chapter 2 (as in how did josh die and how did they run away - was it a spur of the moment thing or planned). Keep the story short but right now i dont think it's finished yet. |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abusei think you should write more of it! |
| Evil lil angel 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abusei rather like this story...i think you should continue with it |
| DRAGONFIRE04 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON. I LIKE TO THE SECOND CHAPTER. |
| dolly-dear 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abuseI really want to know more about this. Please continue? |
| Error-Author 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseAw, this has so much potential to go further.. Then again, it is beautiful at just this. After reading your lighthearted stuff, this really weighs heavy. Short and poignant, it leaves you teetering over that emotional abyss. I really, really enjoyed it. Fantastic job. |
| AmorphousHeart 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was really a beautiful story. :) |
| magalina 2008-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse;_; That was really sad. Very sweet, I like how it went back in time. Is it a one shot or are you writing more? :DD |