Wow I am really surprised by your bribery nevertheless. It is just cute. Don't worry I don't mind reviewing yours with nothing in return. *smile*

Nice poem, it makes me want to lay on the grass outside at night just to stare at the moon... orange full moon at the horizon...ahh... so peaceful. It is actually a very cute poem (in my opinion) Good luck!

great desciptions and word choices.

Well worded poem. It flows well. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~

Bribery always works. :)

It's really intense, and I like how the ending goes back to the beginning. At first I was doubtful about the really short lines, but it makes the poem more intense somehow and entices the reader to keep going. Good job.

WOW... that's all i can say is wow. i absolutely loved it. it captivated me, and i wanted 2 keep on reading. it takes alot 2 keep my attention so i usually don't finish things, but i have 2 say, it kept my interest and i did finish it! Kudos 2 u. u write very well.