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| simpleplan13 2008-01-31 ch 1,  | abuseI like the format.. ending the first two stanzas with italicized lines... the really love the second and last stanza... the idea of being braced to catch the pieces is awesome and the ending is really great too.. the first stanza is good too.. especially the last line.. great piece |
| Twilight Starr 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Random-Idiocity 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseJob well done. I loved the 2nd stanza especially this line, 'Braced—ready to face the pieces.' Keep it Up! |
| James E. Clerk 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseIts so hard to let go of the past, isn't it? Good job. |