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Faith Adeline
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abusegreat piece. I believe the first sentence and last stanza are the most powerful in this poem, but the rest is still good. Wonderful job.
Faith
she smolders
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseSomehow the rhyme of this makes it more heartfelt and honest. Take care.
hey maria
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseThe opening line is one of my all-time favorites. And that is really saying something. So good job. :)
iamxnobody
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abuseAw that was so sweet and sad and whatnot. i loved it
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