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| Faith Adeline 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abusegreat piece. I believe the first sentence and last stanza are the most powerful in this poem, but the rest is still good. Wonderful job. Faith |
| she smolders 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseSomehow the rhyme of this makes it more heartfelt and honest. Take care. |
| hey maria 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseThe opening line is one of my all-time favorites. And that is really saying something. So good job. :) |
| iamxnobody 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseAw that was so sweet and sad and whatnot. i loved it |