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| effervescent-sentiments 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abuseSo, so true, sadly enough. Well thought out. |
| Alphabetical Dreams 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusei love how it seems to have a rhyme scheme, but then you read the next line and it's gone. it's a wodnerful technique. i really like this poem. it has a lot of feeling in it, and i like that it's sort of conversation-like. live, laugh, love. Creating a Dream |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abusesimple but heartfelt. nice. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. It has a genuine feeling to it, you can tell the writer's emotions are real. The ending really pulled the entire piece together nicely. You've done a great job with this piece. Nicely done. |
| NothingMoreNothingLess 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuse"The words are full But they cancel out into empty phrases Too vague or too you Either way, untrue" I know how that goes all too well, but I could've never found the words like you did. I like this, a lot. Cassandra |
| Twilight Starr 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |