 Blaine Finley 2008-07-08 . chapter 1 Just wondering where you came up with the name of the "main super hero" (the non-side kick) since as you can see it is my name and I only know of two others who share this name with me. Oh and there is a typo, "One day one my way home after school", other than that not bad at all. Will be looking forward to the next bit.
Blaine |
 Amaguq 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Er...sorry I was no help to you...BUT FLYING IS REALLY COOL! :P
By the way, what a great story, it has a lot of potential and maybe this one can be published too and I can weedle a free copy off of you... *evil cackle* |
 Black-Neko-Chan 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Yay you started to write your superhero-or super sidekick-story! Seems good so far. Hopefully you'll update this one regularly cough cough unlike some of your other stories cough cough.
Hey! I'll have you know that I suggested shape-shifting after I said to fly! So ha! |
 Lady Katreina 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Happy New Year indeed! Thank you for making this story.
Kind of a coming of age/powers/adult-hood type super sidekick story.
(If I could have any power it would be transatomicmorphification- not a real word, pero (but) I take it to mean the changing of matter at an atomic level, pero again there wouldn't be anything I couldn't do and that'd be annoyingly awful. Except for the really cool power of morphing stuff!)
Thanks again, and also for trudging through that. |
 Kibaslover 2007-12-30 . chapter 1yay! new story
i love it lily-chan!
~*nya*~ |