Great poem. Love the title. It happens. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~

Whoa...this was partly inspired by my poem? That's so cool!
Anyway. It has a very clever and sarcastic tone. I really liked 'by the guy who bemoans his (gasp!) lack of a porche' - that made me smile. I'd say stanza 6 was my favourite; I can relate to the last two lines, to say the least. The very last line was good too, using the technique of satire on yourself at the end.

I love this, and it is so true! Keep writing, I like your style ( :P )




Samelia.