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| Thenardier 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseLovely, yet cryptic. |
| Kusje 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseVery inspiring, and I like the 'colored lights opening' :] good job! |
| Basara 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseof both fireworks and promised seeds of changes... nice... |
| burning in effigy 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuserefreshing style/format; haven't seen it before.. yet simple and straightforward and i like the slight use of imagery which is also implying more sorry for not reviewing back for so long; real life's taken a lot of time overall, fantastic haiku :] |
| Julius Gillian 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThis poem to me preaches optimism. Perfect. |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI really love that last line.. great piece |