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Reviews For: light inspired beauty

Thenardier
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseLovely, yet cryptic.
Kusje
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuseVery inspiring, and I like the 'colored lights opening' :] good job!
Basara
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuseof both fireworks and promised seeds of changes...

nice...
burning in effigy
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuserefreshing style/format; haven't seen it before.. yet

simple and straightforward and i like the slight use of imagery which is also implying more

sorry for not reviewing back for so long; real life's taken a lot of time

overall, fantastic haiku :]
Julius Gillian
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abuseThis poem to me preaches optimism.

Perfect.
simpleplan13
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abuseI really love that last line.. great piece
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