 Thenardier 2008-03-11 . chapter 1Lovely, yet cryptic. |
 Kusje 2008-01-03 . chapter 1Very inspiring, and I like the 'colored lights opening' :] good job! |
 Basara 2008-01-03 . chapter 1of both fireworks and promised seeds of changes...
nice... |
 burning in effigy 2008-01-03 . chapter 1refreshing style/format; haven't seen it before.. yet
simple and straightforward and i like the slight use of imagery which is also implying more
sorry for not reviewing back for so long; real life's taken a lot of time
overall, fantastic haiku :] |
 Julius Gillian 2007-12-31 . chapter 1This poem to me preaches optimism.
Perfect. |
 simpleplan13 2007-12-31 . chapter 1I really love that last line.. great piece |