what a great story. i really like it. i wish the epilogue was longer.

I hate you!:P

Okay, that was just plain cruel. You have to write someting of a sequal to this!

you're evil.
rofl.
loved it.

I love how you keep on mentioning that she finds endless excuses to cover the things she does for him.

The story moved my feelings, and drawn out the memories that I thought I forgot.

I'm sorry that this guy seems to be such an **. PLEASE knock some sense into him for me...please...

bec

p.s. that was amazing. really heart-felt.

Oh my. That was a wonderful piece. My eyes are still blurry from reading so fast and my brain still has to recover from the overwhelmingly good prose. Beautiful.

nice... you know there are moments when you shock me because sometimes you write differently than i remembered, and i have to go see the author's name just to remind me. in a way it's sad, because i shouldn't forget. in a way it's good, because you can shock even those who thought they knew you best.

i liked it though. the sex scene was a bit "eh" because i know it's you writing, but i liked it. it wasn't overly graphic, making it perverse. for a sex scene it was done tastefully. (this is part of the reason i'm hesitant to write a full blown sex scene.) this whole thing is well written though.

i think that there is something that needs to be said about the anonymous-ness of the web.

Very nice! I feel sorry for her. He's such a jerk. Good job. Nice ending.

omg...he's such an **...i feel sorry for her...

Really, really good, sad, but good.

That was really good. A simple story but it carries a lot of emotion. Nicely done!