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E 2008-05-01 . chapter 1
deep, girl! very nice!
Danica Blake 2008-03-20 . chapter 1
How...utterly depressing. Seriously, it was cute but sad and I can't even say that it was bitter sweet because it was mostly just bitter. Really well written, rather poignant.

I liked it, but now I'm craving chocolate because it gives me happy thoughts :P

Nicely done Armith, the spur of the moment one-shots are always fun to read.
Kanilla 2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Happy New Years to you too, sissy! You get to see the fire works?

I liked this, you know that. So bittersweet and sad, it's lovely. And last lines? Ah, who cares if they're a little off/strange. It's the whole picture that counts.

-huggle-
Torn and Tattered 2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Wow, this was actually quite sad. The touch of not knowing what would happen if things would have turned out differently, those 'what ifs' happen so often. It makes story like this realistic and sad, and many people can relate.

Happy new years eve. I loved the one shot
Luna 2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Gah! AG! ;-; This is the sort of thing so many people can relate to and its soo sad!
Still, its a good story because there isn't really a villain in this story. Nothing but his lack of confidence is, and I think that's what makes this special.
:D I hope you write more of these, they're rather fantastic.

Luna-chan
Hypnotic-Monkey-Kicker 2007-12-31 . chapter 1
wow. 'the story without a title' was really good! It had a good message too. I learned something, cause I am like Jaden and look where it got him, haha! Keep up the good work! :)
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