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| Rabid Pair of Jeans 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseLAWL. Great job on this one. :)) |
| Elkica 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI'll never see people eat appels in the same why again. I think that your dialogue was fine. I didn't notice anything because of which it would suck. |
| Dawn-at-Midnight 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I loved that, it was damn sexy. The characters were all huggable, especially when they had to wear the special catering outfits. Now I really want an apple... ~Dawn |
| Yellow skittles 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusei happened to be eating an apple when i read this. A pink lady apple to be exact its a bit sour for its kind though yet its still sweet...weird... m...apples... |
| Abstruse Blue 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. And I think everyone has a weird fetish similar to this one! haha It was adorable. Apples are the best though! I personally like Granny Smiths. As far as the joke, I keep thinking of Mr. Bean as in the British show and movies, but I don't think he has a first name or one that's known. Plus he's not a pothead, just completely ridiculous! xD Then there's this singer/songwriter guy Bartholomew Bean...but I don't know if you mean a real person or some other type of meaning in the joke. Ah well...I don't know. |
| Mochii 2008-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abusereally cute. |
| Sweet Child 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was adorable. Especially the scene with the apple. A really funny fetish you have... As for the joke - sorry, but I have no clue. Which makes me kind of sad, but whatever. So, a last thing, continue writing these brilliantly adorble stories! |
| Jevanminx 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseNow that was jsut sexy. Loved it. JM |
| Let. Me. Fly. 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThere are actual apples called Macintosh?! I thought that was only the Apple company, like the iPods and iMac (aka Macintosh)...? |
| xxbloody-heartsxx 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI completely disagree with you about the dialogues. The characters may not react to each other in totally realistic ways, but it fits with the mood and adorable-ness of the whole piece. I think you did a really great job, and I really enjoyed reading, so thank you for writing it. |