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Eloquent Catastrophe 2009-11-30 . chapter 1
Aw, cute oneshot! I enjoyed reading it. And the joke--it was like, baked is high, and the guy is Mr. Bean, so it's like...baked beans, yeah? Heehee. I caught and liked it. At least I think I caught it...
Ino Aole 2009-03-08 . chapter 1
I love this.
Does the joke have anything to do with Mr. Bean's Holiday?
wolfen princess 2009-01-29 . chapter 1
I thought the apple fetish was really cute! Though I didn't really care for the dialouge in the middle, the ending was really good. If there was a little bit more detail between Kale and Quin, I probably would have liked it more, but still a good story!
gumdropspimp 2008-11-22 . chapter 1
Kale is just too cute with his apple obsession. :D
Liviania 2008-07-18 . chapter 1
I love apples, but no fetish.

There was the Buttered Pig Incident, the Potato Salad Massacre and most traumatizing of all, his one time run in with an absolutely baked-out-of-his-mind man by the name of Mr. Bartholomew Bean.

He's a baked bean?

Livi
dead account hi crap stories 2008-05-15 . chapter 1
LAWL.

Great job on this one. :))
Elkica 2008-04-02 . chapter 1
I'll never see people eat appels in the same why again.

I think that your dialogue was fine. I didn't notice anything because of which it would suck.
King-Cormorant 2008-02-22 . chapter 1
Very nice! I loved that, it was damn sexy. The characters were all huggable, especially when they had to wear the special catering outfits. Now I really want an apple...

~Dawn
Yellow skittles 2008-02-18 . chapter 1
i happened to be eating an apple when i read this. A pink lady apple to be exact its a bit sour for its kind though yet its still sweet...weird...

m...apples...
Abstruse Blue 2008-01-14 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. And I think everyone has a weird fetish similar to this one! haha It was adorable. Apples are the best though! I personally like Granny Smiths.

As far as the joke, I keep thinking of Mr. Bean as in the British show and movies, but I don't think he has a first name or one that's known. Plus he's not a pothead, just completely ridiculous! xD Then there's this singer/songwriter guy Bartholomew Bean...but I don't know if you mean a real person or some other type of meaning in the joke. Ah well...I don't know.
Mochii 2008-01-03 . chapter 1
really cute.
Sweet Child 2008-01-02 . chapter 1
That was adorable. Especially the scene with the apple. A really funny fetish you have...

As for the joke - sorry, but I have no clue. Which makes me kind of sad, but whatever. So, a last thing, continue writing these brilliantly adorble stories!
Jevanminx 2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Now that was jsut sexy. Loved it.
JM
American Mouth 2008-01-01 . chapter 1
There are actual apples called Macintosh?!
I thought that was only the Apple company, like the iPods and iMac (aka Macintosh)...?
Strange.Synchronicity 2007-12-31 . chapter 1
I completely disagree with you about the dialogues. The characters may not react to each other in totally realistic ways, but it fits with the mood and adorable-ness of the whole piece.

I think you did a really great job, and I really enjoyed reading, so thank you for writing it.
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